12-28-2013, 03:00 PM
A quick note and bizarre thought--this poem comes close to a blended metaphor of a hike and an office. It's a tempting read the more I think about it . . . Mac computers, "Gated" as in "Bill Gates," a reference to an apple, the sheets, teeth, and ribbons could be copiers and faxes, the poo sticks could be office toilets or bad business writing, and the last line looks like a heat-em-up microwaveable lunch.
I don't, ultimately, think that's a valid read, but it could be fun to play with . . .
I don't, ultimately, think that's a valid read, but it could be fun to play with . . .

