12-28-2013, 03:18 AM
(12-23-2013, 03:01 PM)Anokk Wrote: Not really sure where the errors are.....I suggest you leave your original and post a revision using tigrflye/Jenn's comments.
I know what you are wanting to show with the piece. After you adjust the presentation it can be (the message) refined to a clearer state.

