American Voyeur

[71degrees]

Oh, I'm still here. And thanks, but no need to hang on to your feedback. When a poem is deemed hopeless with not one shred of suggestion, I will pull it. There's no need for that, no matter what the assumption. I have enough publications…I don't need anyone's "permission" to write a poem, either good or bad. What I'm looking for are suggestions/criticisms for improvement.

Sounds like you had one or two. Next time I'll leave things up longer.