12-24-2013, 10:04 AM
I had some feedback . . . Should I hold onto it? Tectak tends to assume the author's ready to write a solid poem, but needs permission, and permission often takes the form, "fix it!"
As a macro comment, I agree--there's a solid poem here. I'd specify, but I'm not sure you're still frequenting the board. Fwiw, you're not likely to find a more-active board to post to . . . And, far as I can tell, there's not another that'll say, "this is bad." which is a big draw of this'n for me.
As a macro comment, I agree--there's a solid poem here. I'd specify, but I'm not sure you're still frequenting the board. Fwiw, you're not likely to find a more-active board to post to . . . And, far as I can tell, there's not another that'll say, "this is bad." which is a big draw of this'n for me.