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(12-23-2013, 07:39 AM)Anokk Wrote:  In the trees of harmony comma here the shadows show the light. Truth crumbles(comma) and all that is left is blistering lies (no comma), and flashes of painful sorrow as Eden burns and the ashes are packed with salt from the sea. What is this Eden, you may ask yourself, maybe.. "What is Eden?", you may ask yourself.It is the darkest reaches partseither reaches or parts not both of my mind. The darkness is so loud that it can not be ignored. It screams like the child with the different mind surrounded by evil classmates.They poke and prod him to suicide, poking and prodding him to suicide, when all he wanted was one person to stand next to him. Allall he needed was a friend to ease the suffering. How can something so loud be so dark? I'm told it's its a sickness, something that is different from others.Sometimes it's sometimes its visible as brief moments of poorly crafted creativity, other times jumbled glimpses of bloody hand prints around a neck. It matters only which side of the veil you stand.
Hope it is helpful. Some errors I see. - Jenn
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Untitled - by Anokk - 12-23-2013, 07:39 AM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 12-23-2013, 09:15 AM
RE: Untitled - by Anokk - 12-23-2013, 03:01 PM
RE: Untitled - by Nick - 12-28-2013, 03:18 AM
RE: Untitled - by Anokk - 12-28-2013, 02:04 PM
RE: Untitled - by tigrflye - 12-23-2013, 03:30 PM



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