When I'm Comatose

[robinhood]

In dreams, I made you high Literally love this break right here
on me. A dizzy cloud I don't understand the dizzy cloud infused your eyes
infused your eyes, and I
was powerful and proud
to tug your strings at whim.
With philter full, I forgot With philter full i forgot the rules: oh that rolls so nicely
the rules and lit within
your loins a passion hot,
unchecked with no apologies.
I ravaged you with teeth favorite part is right here these two lines
and tenderness so thoroughly,
I slept away the week.


Nice job, some great lines in this.