12-22-2013, 04:08 AM
Wjames- thanks so much. It is a fine line I am trying to walk to balance the sex dream with the cigarette, joint, etc.. -all of it forming mostly from the word "philter".
Thanks for your opinion on the "tug your strings" line. I haven't changed it yet.
If I just drop "powerful" - I lose feet/syllables. I'm open to replacement ideas - but powerful goes along with how I would feel to put someone on the end of my puppet strings - I didnt think it was too far of a reach to the feeling of being high either. - ideas welcome.
Thanks for your opinion on the "tug your strings" line. I haven't changed it yet.
If I just drop "powerful" - I lose feet/syllables. I'm open to replacement ideas - but powerful goes along with how I would feel to put someone on the end of my puppet strings - I didnt think it was too far of a reach to the feeling of being high either. - ideas welcome.