My Wonderland

[cidermaid]

Hi Glitercake... good fun indeed. The warning could be overkill...I think if we did a prompt on this subject, there could yet be cause for a few blushes from what would be thought up by your fellow members, who would def need to post in the pigs arse as opposed to the fun section (image intended ). I actually thought your poem was quite sweet The title put me in mind of a bit of gentel spice.

I know this is fun but I'll leave a couple of comments for you

*Warning* It's about really kinky sex, okay? Its just for fun.

I love it when you tease me
When my wrists are bound to the bed. Perhaps this line could be contracted a bit.
I love it when you bite me
Not too hard but not too softly.

I would tell you your beautiful Did you mean you're here?
But I can't see with this blindfold on.
I could always wait till the morning,
But I want to tell you now.

You love it when I gasp
Out of breath or from surprise.
You love it when I arch my back,
Keep it coming till the sunrise.

I bite my lip,
Nails digging into my palms,
Fists clenched and toes curled.
I know better than to ask if that's all.

I'll remember tonight fondly,
Even though tomorrow I won't be able to stand and again perhaps this line could also be contracted
But that's all thanks to this;
This intense yet lovely, Wonderland.

Thanks for the read - AJ.