12-21-2013, 11:29 AM
It is as if your poem were to describe you eating, smoking, drinking something in (a fascination with the desires and the qualities of a meal).
I want whatever you are eating or smoking but only so that I may really feel about the poem the way you do.
I see an neat concurrence of meaning in the following items (fetishes):
A pipe as a vehicle for the delivery of intoxication is to
A phallus (or vagina)...
A philter (love potion) as...
The subject...
The bong was a cock and a love potion.
You were the house of my soul.
We all melded together in oneness.
I want whatever you are eating or smoking but only so that I may really feel about the poem the way you do.
I see an neat concurrence of meaning in the following items (fetishes):
A pipe as a vehicle for the delivery of intoxication is to
A phallus (or vagina)...
A philter (love potion) as...
The subject...
The bong was a cock and a love potion.
You were the house of my soul.
We all melded together in oneness.