When I'm Comatose
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I made you high
on me. A dizzy cloud
infused your eyes, and I
was powerful and proud
to tug your strings at whim.
With philter full, I forgot
the rules and lit within
your loins a passion hot,
unchecked with no apologies.
I ravaged you with teeth
and tenderness so thoroughly,
I slept away the week.



Original:
In dreams, I made you high
on me. A dizzy cloud
infused your eyes, and I
was powerful and proud
to tug your strings at whim.
With philter full, I forgot
the rules and lit within
your loins a passion hot,
unchecked with no apologies.
I ravaged you with teeth
and tenderness so thoroughly,
I slept away the week.
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When I'm Comatose - by tigrflye - 12-21-2013, 07:15 AM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by Todd - 12-21-2013, 07:33 AM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by Nihil Loc - 12-21-2013, 11:29 AM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by cidermaid - 12-21-2013, 06:57 PM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by tigrflye - 12-21-2013, 07:57 PM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by cidermaid - 12-21-2013, 08:13 PM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by tigrflye - 12-21-2013, 10:03 PM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by Wjames - 12-22-2013, 03:53 AM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by tigrflye - 12-22-2013, 04:08 AM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by Todd - 12-22-2013, 10:31 AM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by tigrflye - 12-22-2013, 10:56 AM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by robinhood - 12-22-2013, 10:39 AM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by Todd - 12-22-2013, 11:02 AM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by robinhood - 12-22-2013, 11:08 AM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by tigrflye - 12-22-2013, 11:11 AM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by robinhood - 12-22-2013, 11:14 AM
RE: When I'm Comatose - by JollyRoger - 12-23-2013, 02:12 AM



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