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Freedom
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12-21-2013, 02:10 AM
Hello there, I found this poem somewhat difficult. Difficult to find its' rhythm. And as a result fairly unengaging, save one line. Assuming 'silence' was intended, I found "dare desire to silence my dream" haunting. I lingered in thought for some time over that line. That alone was worth the price of admission.
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RE: Freedom - by rowens - 12-19-2013, 10:41 PM
RE: Freedom - by Clandestine - 12-20-2013, 02:30 AM
RE: Freedom - by Mungo man - 12-20-2013, 08:06 AM
RE: Freedom - by Paul1004 - 12-21-2013, 02:10 AM
RE: Freedom - by tigrflye - 12-21-2013, 07:12 AM
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