The Secret is Dying
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It doesn't matter if the n. is dead...it's just that that is one of the few times a person can be laid anywhere (placed)---I've just read what I wrote and I know I'm going to get PMs about how many times they have been laid---but you know what I mean. You've got it right the way it is, since this is what you are exploring...I was just confused because they were placed, then their teeth rattled. But then, I've written from the point of view where I am dead and laugh, so I can hardly throw stones.

cheers,
mel.
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The Secret is Dying - by 71degrees - 12-13-2013, 11:17 PM
RE: The Secret is Dying - by tectak - 12-14-2013, 05:05 PM
RE: The Secret is Dying - by 71degrees - 12-15-2013, 02:15 AM
RE: The Secret is Dying - by bena - 12-15-2013, 09:51 AM
RE: The Secret is Dying - by 71degrees - 12-15-2013, 01:05 PM
RE: The Secret is Dying - by 71degrees - 12-17-2013, 10:30 AM
RE: The Secret is Dying - by bena - 12-17-2013, 10:42 AM
RE: The Secret is Dying - by 71degrees - 12-17-2013, 12:44 PM
RE: The Secret is Dying - by bena - 12-17-2013, 10:22 PM



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