12-17-2013, 01:11 PM
Excellent suggestions Chris!
I'm taking some time off from new chapters to clarify content, increase the show vs tell ratio, and general edits. I incorporated many of your suggestions into this one. I'm not bumping the other threads just altering them.
Thanks again.
I'm taking some time off from new chapters to clarify content, increase the show vs tell ratio, and general edits. I incorporated many of your suggestions into this one. I'm not bumping the other threads just altering them.
Thanks again.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson