Short Story: Merlin and the Dragon Queen chapter 8
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That was a fun read with lots of action. I like how you introduced the sword in the stone, and also enjoyed how you ended this one.

Nicely done on Arthur's battle scene as well.

Solid addition to the rest.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Merlin and the Dragon Queen chapter 8 - by milo - 12-16-2013, 12:57 PM
RE: Merlin and the Dragon Queen chapter 8 - by Todd - 12-17-2013, 07:54 AM



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