Short Story: Merlin and the Dragon Queen chapter 8

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Thanks, I've been patiently waiting.

His clothing was rotting, his robes laid out confused me. I'd prefer borrowed clothes, festive clothes, costume, something to remind me the fauns dressed him. What are thin chunks? Massive sheets?

typo: They great wings flexed. There was another, it's fixed, or I just can't find it now.

I loved the solution to not leaving the sword, and Ygdrassil's appearance.

Thanks. There are a couple typos I've been trying to stamp them out. I attempted to address those other two points. I did.miss a week but I think overall I am still eight chapters in eight weeks.