12-14-2013, 01:44 AM
(12-14-2013, 01:35 AM)rimeclik Wrote: I love rhyme - I love junk - I love this poem!!You can come and clear the contents if you like...it's turning in to a nightmare. It's all yours.
As an antique dealer I see so much of this and you've painted the picture so well that I can even smell this old home!!
No need to apologise for schmalz, rhyme or rhyme scheme for me - oh sorry, I see it wasn't you!! You say this is work in progress with more to come - you could only spoil it now.
Cheers - Richard.
Best,
tectak