12-13-2013, 12:53 AM
There's nothing wrong with this as a demo for a song. Do you have a band? If you do, you play with them, and after a while you get something special. Add words to a bridge, sing it a little higher, like people do; add some more verses, and play around with some solos, and it'll work.
The words are all right. They can stay as they are, just add some more verses. Two more verses would seem right for a song like this. When you get behind a microphone and P.A. with a band, you naturally sing louder, with more expression. You have a good enough voice for that.
If you have a band, you probably know all this already. And you should record that and post it.
The words are all right. They can stay as they are, just add some more verses. Two more verses would seem right for a song like this. When you get behind a microphone and P.A. with a band, you naturally sing louder, with more expression. You have a good enough voice for that.
If you have a band, you probably know all this already. And you should record that and post it.