12-11-2013, 12:22 PM
(12-11-2013, 12:06 PM)trueenigma Wrote:ha, I've never recorded for public consumption, and I'm not sure I'll figure out how to post it, but I'll give it a go. Don't be holding your breath or anything.(12-11-2013, 12:05 PM)milo Wrote:I wanna hear it too.(12-11-2013, 12:04 PM)ellajam Wrote: Not of the last edit, I put it aside a bit. Burst/pant is interesting, maybe I'll record both ways, decide and call it a day. Thanks, milo.post the audio HERE so I can hear it.
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Whew, I'm sure there was an easier way to post it from Ipad, but there it is.
I thought pant won, but then realized it throws my tenses off again. Those lines work best in past tense. Goodbye pant.
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