12-11-2013, 08:10 AM
Hi! I'm new to this poetry thing, so take my advice for what it's worth. The rhythm seems off a lot, I don't really know the terminology. The flow is just off to me.
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As I drive
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As I drive - by gilmored - 12-09-2013, 03:36 PM
RE: As I drive. - by tectak - 12-09-2013, 06:31 PM
RE: As I drive. - by gilmored - 12-09-2013, 10:52 PM
RE: As I drive. - by tectak - 12-10-2013, 07:24 AM
RE: As I drive. - by trueenigma - 12-10-2013, 07:54 AM
RE: As I drive. - by gilmored - 12-10-2013, 11:09 AM
RE: As I drive.(edit 1) - by crow - 12-10-2013, 01:18 PM
RE: As I drive.(edit 1) - by gilmored - 12-10-2013, 11:51 PM
RE: As I drive - by alatos - 12-11-2013, 08:10 AM
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