12-10-2013, 12:43 PM
Just read billy's pinned post about placing edits above the original. Apologies.
Milo--well, I used to write a "perfect Italian"--fourteen iambic pentameter feet, Italian rhyme--and then break it where doing so would produce an effect. Two of these together plus an additional broken sestet is what I call a broken double Italian.
That sounds grandiose, maybe. When I wrote that originally, I was pretty in-my-head.
Milo--well, I used to write a "perfect Italian"--fourteen iambic pentameter feet, Italian rhyme--and then break it where doing so would produce an effect. Two of these together plus an additional broken sestet is what I call a broken double Italian.
That sounds grandiose, maybe. When I wrote that originally, I was pretty in-my-head.

