As I drive

[Truerenigma]

As I drive there's so many sights.
As?Is? If you weren't driving would the sights still be there? Where and are might save the grammar and syntax. But it's still too passive. I see nothing to draw me in here. Maybe I'll just take a nap. Or maybe you could write something like "I drive to. . ." or something along those lines. Your pick. Nap time or drive time. Either one is fine with me.
So many lefts, so many rights.Left right up down so so go, snow! Did you come up with that on your own?
Up and down the hills we go.
All of them cloaked in snow.

With trees on both sides,
the road hardly visible,
pastel skies,
no reason to be miserable.Really? I'm feeling pretty miserable at the moment, but ok, you're right; if there are trees on both sides everything should be okay and I should stop complaining. Honestly, why mention it? I wouldn't have assumed there was a reason. I can only guess that you could see the expression on my face from reading this, and decided to interject with some form of consolation.

I speak these words
as I go.That is creative. I'm saying what I'm saying. Ok. go on...
I don't want to forget
I want you to know.

Of the inspiring scenes Is this a new sentence or part of the last one? I can't remember either. I'm talking to myself to try and help myself remind myself.
that come to my eyes.
What I think about,
and realize;Huh? No comment. Fix it.

Thinking of things
I've never thought,Thinking thought's I've never had. So bad it's never been this bad. My mind has never had the time to think of all these silly rhyme. I've never felt this way before. I don't want to feel it anymore. Cry me a river, rockstar! Sing it!
My brain always rings
with this curse I've got.Oh, sorry. I'd have been much nicer to this poem had I known it was cursed. No to this.

My meter is off.
my tempo tampered.
The critics may scoff.
I'm not up to their standards.I must say I agree

My meaning is clear.
This we all know.
The voices I hear,
want it to show.
Yep. They show,
and they, I fear
are completely unoriginal...

I see nothing here to show that these are even your thoughts. It's pretty cut and paste, and I've heard it all a thousand times before, and then a thousand more.

What do you want us to say? Trust me, you don't want more crit. Stick with Mr. Tectak. He's about as good as it get's out here in the wasteland that is the internet, and we're luck to have him. He won't steer you wrong.