When Morning Winds Had Not Yet Come
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(12-09-2013, 10:59 PM)HalfOpenArms Wrote:  Brilliant, I would change but one thing--should that be a colon in your last line? I think a comma might function better.
yes, I was unsure here. I thought a colon might provide a little more emphasis, but maybe a comma would be best.
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When Morning Winds Had Not Yet Come - by alatos - 12-09-2013, 01:46 PM
RE: When Morning Winds Had Not Yet Come - by M. Warrens - 12-09-2013, 10:33 PM
RE: When Morning Winds Had Not Yet Come - by alatos - 12-09-2013, 11:57 PM
RE: When Morning Winds Had Not Yet Come - by FreeIt - 12-30-2013, 05:13 AM
RE: When Morning Winds Had Not Yet Come - by Bemh - 12-29-2013, 03:48 AM



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