Beaten Path

Beaten Path

M. Warrens
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#11

12-09-2013, 11:31 PM

to me, it seems that this poem could end with the fourth stanza, and stanzas five and six could be there own poem, or the start of one. my only reasoning is just cause the first four have there own flow and feel different from the last two stanzas.

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RE: Beaten Path - by M. Warrens - 12-09-2013, 11:31 PM

RE: Beaten Path - by dialectical - 12-13-2013, 09:15 AM

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