To: All the Girls
#6
I kinda dig the form personally. But the ending (endings are always the hardest for me) seems to be really off the wall in my opinion. The last line doesn't even make an awful lot of sense to me. Sure I can understand the individual words, but what idea is it conveying?
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To: All the Girls - by yourfellowhuman - 12-05-2013, 03:58 AM
RE: To: All the Girls - by ThePinsir - 12-05-2013, 07:28 AM
RE: To: All the Girls - by Polar Bear - 12-05-2013, 02:02 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by beaufort - 12-06-2013, 11:35 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by Speaktaboo - 12-09-2013, 10:59 AM
RE: To: All the Girls - by alatos - 12-09-2013, 01:49 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by teejai - 01-12-2014, 01:28 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by billy - 01-12-2014, 03:50 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by sandraleigh05 - 06-19-2014, 03:54 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by blazekitty14 - 06-22-2014, 02:14 AM
RE: To: All the Girls - by ellajam - 06-22-2014, 09:03 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by QDeathstar - 06-24-2014, 10:15 AM
RE: To: All the Girls - by stajas - 06-25-2014, 01:03 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by expiring_touch - 07-07-2014, 12:01 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by bena - 07-07-2014, 05:47 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by Erthona - 07-08-2014, 05:30 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by gernseeker - 07-13-2014, 11:55 AM
RE: To: All the Girls - by KROD - 07-13-2014, 12:24 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by CameranMorgan - 09-04-2014, 12:14 PM
RE: To: All the Girls - by Mwaba don - 09-11-2014, 06:35 AM



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