Entropy
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I thoroughly enjoyed this poem! It is really unique compared to anything else I have read in a long time. Nothing seamed forced, and the stanzas really flow well together. Could you just explain the rabbit part to me? (Im not to familiar with biblical references if that's what it is) Also, I agree with the other 2 posts, and this is def. worthy of a more advanced forum
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Entropy - by crow - 12-07-2013, 04:58 PM
RE: Entropy - by rowens - 12-08-2013, 07:46 AM
RE: Entropy - by crow - 12-08-2013, 12:41 PM
RE: Entropy - by Leanne - 12-08-2013, 01:30 PM
RE: Entropy - by Bemh - 12-09-2013, 06:02 AM
RE: Entropy - by trueenigma - 12-09-2013, 06:26 AM
RE: Entropy - by crow - 12-09-2013, 08:37 AM
RE: Entropy - by Bemh - 12-09-2013, 09:44 AM
RE: Entropy - by Speaktaboo - 12-09-2013, 11:04 AM



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