eclipse- haiku

[gilmored]

I think you should place a cut at the end of the first line, a dash would do nicely. Also, "eclipse" is singular, and if you're referring to the eclipse when you say "hollow reflections," that should be singular, too.

Thank you for the punctuation tip. I used reflections instead of reflection because an eclipse has different stages, as a person has different qualities. Beauty is not an object.