12-08-2013, 05:52 AM
I think you should place a cut at the end of the first line, a dash would do nicely. Also, "eclipse" is singular, and if you're referring to the eclipse when you say "hollow reflections," that should be singular, too.
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eclipse- haiku - by gilmored - 12-05-2013, 01:30 PM
RE: eclipse- western haiku - by Polar Bear - 12-05-2013, 03:29 PM
RE: eclipse- western haiku - by milo - 12-05-2013, 03:43 PM
RE: eclipse- western haiku - by ThePinsir - 12-05-2013, 11:38 PM
RE: eclipse- haiku - by HalfOpenArms - 12-08-2013, 05:52 AM
RE: eclipse- haiku - by gilmored - 12-08-2013, 08:03 AM
RE: eclipse- haiku - by billy - 12-08-2013, 08:18 AM
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