Disposable
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(12-05-2013, 10:16 PM)Simatong Wrote:  I found the poem a bit hard to follow, though I must say I did like this line:

(11-26-2013, 12:33 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  Old tear-marked letters become coffee stained;
the ink may have run, but harsh words remain.
I will edit this further with the intention of tying in the various couplets better. My strategy will be to bring up the 'recycle' couplet of the longer version as my opener. Then try to stitch the lines to one another more cohensively. Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and reply!/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-26-2013, 12:33 AM
RE: Disposable - by Todd - 11-26-2013, 01:09 AM
RE: Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-26-2013, 03:42 AM
RE: Disposable - by ellz483 - 11-27-2013, 12:41 AM
RE: Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-27-2013, 04:23 AM
RE: Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-29-2013, 01:29 AM
RE: Disposable - by Charlesjoseph - 11-29-2013, 02:56 AM
RE: Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-29-2013, 08:57 AM
RE: Disposable - by Todd - 11-29-2013, 03:19 AM
RE: Disposable - by Keith - 11-29-2013, 10:06 AM
RE: Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-29-2013, 11:38 PM
RE: Disposable - by Keith - 11-30-2013, 02:56 AM
RE: Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-30-2013, 06:30 AM
RE: Disposable (edit 3 & 4) - by ChristopherSea - 11-30-2013, 09:15 AM
RE: Disposable (edit 3 & 4) - by trueenigma - 11-30-2013, 04:21 PM
RE: Disposable (edit 3 & 4) - by ChristopherSea - 11-30-2013, 10:06 PM
RE: Disposable (edit 3 & 4) - by trueenigma - 12-01-2013, 01:14 AM
RE: Disposable (edit 3 & 4) - by ChristopherSea - 12-01-2013, 02:04 AM
RE: Disposable (edit5) - by ChristopherSea - 01-14-2014, 09:43 PM
RE: Disposable (edit5) - by Codry - 01-16-2014, 03:36 AM
RE: Disposable (edit5) - by ChristopherSea - 01-16-2014, 06:00 AM
RE: Disposable (edit5) - by YouAreMe - 01-16-2014, 11:35 AM
RE: Disposable (edit 5) - by Leanne - 01-17-2014, 05:04 AM
RE: Disposable (edit 5) - by ChristopherSea - 02-06-2014, 06:31 AM



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