eclipse- haiku

eclipse- haiku

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12-05-2013, 03:29 PM

Beautiful image; thanks for sharing.

I feel uncomfortable commenting on haiku, but I feel that perhaps the cut could be stronger? I'm thinking:

(12-05-2013, 01:30 PM)gilmored Wrote: A solar eclipse
Is nothing compared to you—
Amazing beauty

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eclipse- haiku - by gilmored - 12-05-2013, 01:30 PM

RE: eclipse- western haiku - by Polar Bear - 12-05-2013, 03:29 PM

RE: eclipse- haiku - by gilmored - 12-08-2013, 08:03 AM

RE: eclipse- haiku - by billy - 12-08-2013, 08:18 AM

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