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eclipse- haiku
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#1
12-05-2013, 01:30 PM
a solar eclipse
is nothing compared to your
amazing beauty
//
An eclipse;
hollow reflections
of you

thx for the advice guys. hows this rivision?
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Messages In This Thread
eclipse- haiku - by gilmored - 12-05-2013, 01:30 PM
RE: eclipse- western haiku - by Polar Bear - 12-05-2013, 03:29 PM
RE: eclipse- western haiku - by milo - 12-05-2013, 03:43 PM
RE: eclipse- western haiku - by ThePinsir - 12-05-2013, 11:38 PM
RE: eclipse- haiku - by HalfOpenArms - 12-08-2013, 05:52 AM
RE: eclipse- haiku - by gilmored - 12-08-2013, 08:03 AM
RE: eclipse- haiku - by billy - 12-08-2013, 08:18 AM



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