12-05-2013, 12:18 PM
i think it should be. I sit on a highrise stoop/ watching three stars develop. it solves the rushed feel, ties it all together well, and gets rid of the double rise. just a sugestion tho. this is your poem
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RE: Dusk - by justcloudy - 11-24-2013, 07:45 PM
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