12-03-2013, 02:42 AM
Hey Chris, Yeah I realize that some suggestions are style in nature, but that's okay. I appreciate you helping me make this better. I've stepped back from editing for a bit to make new chapters. Another should be up today.
Thank you again, your feedback is very helpful.
Best,
Todd
Thank you again, your feedback is very helpful.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
