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12-01-2013, 02:04 AM
(12-01-2013, 01:14 AM)trueenigma Wrote: Tbh, I would completely overhaul the whole thing, and inject some verbs. It needs some action. What I think I will do is bring that final recycle couplet up as the opening thesis, attempt to put some more action into as you suggest and then put this down for a while!
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-26-2013, 12:33 AM
RE: Disposable - by Todd - 11-26-2013, 01:09 AM
RE: Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-26-2013, 03:42 AM
RE: Disposable - by ellz483 - 11-27-2013, 12:41 AM
RE: Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-27-2013, 04:23 AM
RE: Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-29-2013, 01:29 AM
RE: Disposable - by Charlesjoseph - 11-29-2013, 02:56 AM
RE: Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-29-2013, 08:57 AM
RE: Disposable - by Todd - 11-29-2013, 03:19 AM
RE: Disposable - by Keith - 11-29-2013, 10:06 AM
RE: Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-29-2013, 11:38 PM
RE: Disposable - by Keith - 11-30-2013, 02:56 AM
RE: Disposable - by ChristopherSea - 11-30-2013, 06:30 AM
RE: Disposable (edit 3 & 4) - by ChristopherSea - 11-30-2013, 09:15 AM
RE: Disposable (edit 3 & 4) - by trueenigma - 11-30-2013, 04:21 PM
RE: Disposable (edit 3 & 4) - by ChristopherSea - 11-30-2013, 10:06 PM
RE: Disposable (edit 3 & 4) - by trueenigma - 12-01-2013, 01:14 AM
RE: Disposable (edit 3 & 4) - by ChristopherSea - 12-01-2013, 02:04 AM
RE: Disposable (edit5) - by ChristopherSea - 01-14-2014, 09:43 PM
RE: Disposable (edit5) - by Codry - 01-16-2014, 03:36 AM
RE: Disposable (edit5) - by ChristopherSea - 01-16-2014, 06:00 AM
RE: Disposable (edit5) - by YouAreMe - 01-16-2014, 11:35 AM
RE: Disposable (edit 5) - by Leanne - 01-17-2014, 05:04 AM
RE: Disposable (edit 5) - by ChristopherSea - 02-06-2014, 06:31 AM
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