11-30-2013, 06:57 PM
Hello Lance,
Thanks for your feedback! The intended effect of the shortening stanzas was one of "speeding up", but I understand that it can also be felt as a poem running out of steam. Do you feel that the problem is mostly the layout of the poem, or would you say that there's also a weakening in the words themselves?
All best!
Jan
Thanks for your feedback! The intended effect of the shortening stanzas was one of "speeding up", but I understand that it can also be felt as a poem running out of steam. Do you feel that the problem is mostly the layout of the poem, or would you say that there's also a weakening in the words themselves?
All best!
Jan