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[justcloudy]

Ella, first, that's really sweet of you to say, thanks so much. I usually think my edits are worse than my originals too, at least in some way, so I'm glad that my editing is at least of use to someone? Haha.

I think I agree with you on all your points about the poem. Thank you so much for your thoughts and the time you put into them. I'll see what I can do, but not gonna lie, I am feeling kinda overwhelmed by this one.

Thanks again!

-justcloudy