11-29-2013, 05:36 AM
Chris that's a lovely change for S3, thank you!
And yes about childs/child's, oops, sorry for that.
rowens fragmented isn't a bad thing here imo, pain often can feel like fragments. I guess I'm just trying to give readers a brief glimpse into someone else's sorrow.
That's too bad you still don't like the first stanza. =/ I thought it was an improvement.
-justcloudy
And yes about childs/child's, oops, sorry for that.
rowens fragmented isn't a bad thing here imo, pain often can feel like fragments. I guess I'm just trying to give readers a brief glimpse into someone else's sorrow.
That's too bad you still don't like the first stanza. =/ I thought it was an improvement.
-justcloudy
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.