Boardwalks (edit #4.1)

[ellajam]

I have read the new one a few times and I am disappointed with both "ridden" and conjured.

Pedaled form me conjured up tourist bike rentals on the jersey shore, this ridden word is boring me to tears. Conjured? - eh, too fake IMO.

Well, I knew a quick response couldn't be good.

I think I caved to comments on bicycles pedaled being confusing, and count not carrying over to the them.

Thanks for the comment, I'll try to clarify without throwing that cliched babe out with the bathwater.

My guess is you haven't gotten yet to what I've done to that simple dog run.