Boardwalks (edit #4.1)

[ellajam]

You edited? I didn't notice. Let me read through it a few times and I will return.

last week or so, forgot to bump it or add edit to thread name, oops.

There is no rush - you aren't going anywhere I am not going anywhere.
The break on "ghost" is excellent BTW.

Nope, not worried about my assignment being due, grin.

The ghost break was important but judging from the comments it seems I expected too much from it, thinking it could help with the two tenses. fail. I've tried to clear it up a bit, but may have thrown too much in the stew.