Susceptible to change
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(11-27-2013, 04:30 AM)tectak Wrote:  [quote='Keith' pid='148090' dateline='1385330394']
Edit tectak it was then heslopian

Young enough to notice change,
she softened the moment
with milk-washed skin,
defined by her perfect silhouette.

I hid this creature rather well,
buried beneath storyboard Beanos,
angry looks and desperate Dandys.
My eyes now opened in a primeval light,
reality catches me brutal as a dog bite.


Brilliant! Why didn't you write this the first timeSmile?
Best,
tectak
Thank you I mustSmile

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Messages In This Thread
Susceptible to change - by Keith - 11-25-2013, 06:59 AM
RE: Susceptible to change - by tectak - 11-25-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: Susceptible to change - by Keith - 11-25-2013, 08:21 AM
RE: Susceptible to change - by heslopian - 11-25-2013, 12:01 PM
RE: Susceptible to change - by Keith - 11-26-2013, 10:04 AM
RE: Susceptible to change - by tectak - 11-27-2013, 04:30 AM
RE: Susceptible to change - by Keith - 11-27-2013, 08:51 AM



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