11-27-2013, 05:59 AM
You have that wonderfully outlandish boom of rainbows at the end, but everything above it feels like flat reportage. The shape of a tornado won't add much.
Though it has that subtle birth and rebirth theme. And I like the whole thing the more I think about it. Despite, or really, because of the flat reporting and the boom at the end.
Though it has that subtle birth and rebirth theme. And I like the whole thing the more I think about it. Despite, or really, because of the flat reporting and the boom at the end.