11-26-2013, 06:24 AM
Cloudy, appreciate the thoughts and the read. I will go back and address the names as well as evaluating any compromises. I'll see what I can do there.
As too suspending your disbelief, any specifics on where that was (or was it off and on in a few places). Any idea why? I'll see if I can address that too.
Hopefully, the act of editing will smooth a lot of issues out. Which I assume it will to some extent, because nothing is great before edit.
I appreciate the comments and encouragement.
Thank you,
Todd
As too suspending your disbelief, any specifics on where that was (or was it off and on in a few places). Any idea why? I'll see if I can address that too.
Hopefully, the act of editing will smooth a lot of issues out. Which I assume it will to some extent, because nothing is great before edit.
I appreciate the comments and encouragement.
Thank you,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson