11-26-2013, 05:33 AM
Beaufort, the entire substance of this poem resides in the last two lines. Considering that this poem is titled 'impenetrable koan,' it might not be too much of a stretch to just use those two lines. Koans are typically short, and your last two lines fit the spirit of this poem very well.
In fact, it might even add to its mystique.
In fact, it might even add to its mystique.