Why Delay? (a short poem)
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Thanks for the suggestions guys. I think I will keep "set through," because to me it gives a nice image of the solitude as something very tangible if that makes any sense. I do agree with the semicolon on the second to last line, it helps. Thanks guys!
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Why Delay? (a short poem) - by alatos - 11-23-2013, 02:25 AM
RE: Why Delay? (a short poem) - by Charlesjoseph - 11-23-2013, 09:53 PM
RE: Why Delay? (a short poem) - by Mitya - 11-25-2013, 11:24 AM
RE: Why Delay? (a short poem) - by alatos - 11-26-2013, 05:10 AM
RE: Why Delay? (a short poem) - by tomoffing - 11-26-2013, 08:20 AM
RE: Why Delay? (a short poem) - by Mikeodial - 11-27-2013, 09:58 PM
RE: Why Delay? (a short poem) - by gilmored - 12-05-2013, 12:07 PM
RE: Why Delay? (a short poem) - by Simatong - 12-05-2013, 06:15 PM



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