Short Story: Merlin and the Dragon Queen chapter 6

[milo]

I loved how you painted the scene milo. I could visualize it easily. Maybe your best chapter so far--intricate and lovely.

One minor call out: " ...lighting up the whole clearance" Did you mean clearing?

Thanks Todd, good.catch, all these damn black Friday commercials invading my thoughts.

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Honeysuckle and melons.

Beautiful chapter.

Thanks.