Primal (new poem, Edit 3)

Primal (new poem, Edit 3)

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11-25-2013, 04:16 PM

Hello milo and trueenigma,

Thanks for the suggestions, and it was great fun to read your discussion. Smile

I'm going to let the poem rest for a few days and then I'll come back to it, I think that it would be good to look at it again with some more distance.

All best,
Jan

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Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by jdvanwijk - 11-19-2013, 11:17 PM

RE: Primal (new poem) - by heslopian - 11-20-2013, 12:05 AM

RE: Primal (new poem) - by jdvanwijk - 11-20-2013, 04:22 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 2 ) - by heslopian - 11-23-2013, 12:54 PM

RE: Primal (new poem) - by SkaaDee - 11-20-2013, 12:14 PM

RE: Primal (new poem) - by jdvanwijk - 11-20-2013, 05:13 PM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 1) - by milo - 11-21-2013, 08:39 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 11-21-2013, 10:29 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 1) - by trueenigma - 11-21-2013, 10:19 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 11-21-2013, 04:09 PM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 1) - by beaufort - 11-21-2013, 09:03 PM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 2 ) - by jdvanwijk - 11-22-2013, 06:15 PM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 2 ) - by milo - 11-23-2013, 08:38 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 2 ) - by jdvanwijk - 11-23-2013, 09:35 PM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 2 ) - by milo - 11-24-2013, 03:17 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 2 ) - by jdvanwijk - 11-24-2013, 04:50 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by milo - 11-24-2013, 05:27 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by jdvanwijk - 11-24-2013, 06:19 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by jdvanwijk - 11-24-2013, 06:43 PM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by milo - 11-25-2013, 02:07 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by trueenigma - 11-25-2013, 01:18 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by jdvanwijk - 11-25-2013, 02:01 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by Charlesjoseph - 11-25-2013, 02:46 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by jdvanwijk - 11-25-2013, 03:13 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by trueenigma - 11-25-2013, 03:37 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by milo - 11-25-2013, 03:48 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by trueenigma - 11-25-2013, 03:55 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by milo - 11-25-2013, 03:58 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by trueenigma - 11-25-2013, 05:29 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by milo - 11-25-2013, 05:47 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by trueenigma - 11-25-2013, 05:56 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by jdvanwijk - 11-25-2013, 04:16 PM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by jdvanwijk - 11-29-2013, 06:42 PM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by LanceRocks - 11-30-2013, 12:17 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by jdvanwijk - 11-30-2013, 06:57 PM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by LanceRocks - 12-01-2013, 01:21 PM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by jdvanwijk - 12-01-2013, 07:50 PM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by LanceRocks - 12-01-2013, 11:49 PM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by Todd - 12-02-2013, 02:48 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by LanceRocks - 12-02-2013, 03:07 AM

RE: Primal (new poem, Edit 3) - by Todd - 12-02-2013, 03:09 AM

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