In War and Pieces

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In War and Pieces

Euan

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11-25-2013, 01:47 PM

Thank you Keith, I agree with you totally, especially on inverting the first stanza, it actually makes more sense inverted.

Cheers.

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In War and Pieces - by Euan - 11-23-2013, 10:46 PM

RE: In War and Pieces - by Euan - 11-24-2013, 05:19 AM

RE: In War and Pieces - by Keith - 11-25-2013, 07:25 AM

RE: In War and Pieces - by Euan - 11-25-2013, 01:47 PM

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