Short Story: The word Machine

[Todd]

Chazz, this was a fun Night Gallary/HP Lovecraft type read. I enjoyed it. I will try to come back and read it critically later, and see if I can be of any help. As it stands though at least for me it has compelling content and was enjoyable to read. That's probably the most important thing.

There are always areas to fix, and I'll spend some time looking for them over the next few reads.

My initial thoughts,

Todd