11-24-2013, 08:15 AM
Hi Chris,
To be perfectly honest, the style of poetry you usually post isn't really my thing so I generally don't have a lot to say about it. I've been a bit absent these last few days and only saw this now, so again I don't have a lot to say, but now it's just because it's already so wonderful. ;D
This really spoke to me. I in turn identified with it and was disturbed by it, in perfect proportion. Read aloud it mostly flows beautifully, though I have to admit I do stumble on those tricky names, and "excised zebra stripes" doesn't work for me either. But could just be me.
Thanks for writing, perfecting, sharing. =]
-justcloudy
To be perfectly honest, the style of poetry you usually post isn't really my thing so I generally don't have a lot to say about it. I've been a bit absent these last few days and only saw this now, so again I don't have a lot to say, but now it's just because it's already so wonderful. ;D
This really spoke to me. I in turn identified with it and was disturbed by it, in perfect proportion. Read aloud it mostly flows beautifully, though I have to admit I do stumble on those tricky names, and "excised zebra stripes" doesn't work for me either. But could just be me.
Thanks for writing, perfecting, sharing. =]
-justcloudy
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