11-23-2013, 11:56 PM
"I don’t what this guy is, but he’s dressed like a vampire.” - missing "know"
Another thought: when Shark thing or Shark face is used as a name, I think it should be capitalized.
I'm referring to "thing" and "face". Shark Face
You know, like Swamp Thing.
Of course sometimes you wrote "the shark thing" and then you wouldn't.
I like it a lot, Todd.
Now, poor Tyler has the darkness in him. .
And I wouldn't have thought about going under the ribs with the staff - good thought
-Jenn
Another thought: when Shark thing or Shark face is used as a name, I think it should be capitalized.
I'm referring to "thing" and "face". Shark Face
You know, like Swamp Thing.
Of course sometimes you wrote "the shark thing" and then you wouldn't.
I like it a lot, Todd.
Now, poor Tyler has the darkness in him. .
And I wouldn't have thought about going under the ribs with the staff - good thought
-Jenn