In War and Pieces
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I've placed this in Serious for a reason. I want to improve

Pieces rain like blood tattered confetti,
still remembering their names, their faces.
They're screaming through their exit wounds
I place barrel to temple, pull

Only now have they finally ceased
they've reduced to a light chanting
Watching me, touching me, stripping me
taking my soul, my resolve, drained.

They cannot take my purpose, survival.
Nor can I theirs, akin struggle.
Soldiers, all the Enemies I've killed.
Soldiers, all the Brothers I've lost.

Washed ashore, relinquished from the Sea
that corralled Souls, eliminated our Conscience.
You'll find out who I am within the imagery, it pleads 'fuck the metaphors and scream'
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Messages In This Thread
In War and Pieces - by Euan - 11-23-2013, 10:46 PM
RE: In War and Pieces - by heslopian - 11-23-2013, 11:45 PM
RE: In War and Pieces - by Euan - 11-24-2013, 05:19 AM
RE: In War and Pieces - by Keith - 11-25-2013, 07:25 AM
RE: In War and Pieces - by Euan - 11-25-2013, 01:47 PM



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